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The readers friend drags her into the upscale nightclub known as Lux,she's not really enjoying herself but could a certain ruler of hell change that?

"Come on F/N your going to have a good time." Your friend Becca said as the two of you waited outside the new upscale nightclub called "Lux" she had been here with a few more of her party girl friends last weekend and somehow she wanted to share it with you.

"And what makes you think that?
I told you before its no use dragging me to a nightclub I can't dance and 99.9% of the music they play is over sexualized what makes you think I'll have fun?"

Becca rolled her eyes "alright F/N  if you don't have a good time then I'll come with you to whatever it is your into Deal?"


After waiting in line for what felt like forever we were finally face to face with the bouncer,with a quick flash of our IDs he removed the chain permitting us access. "Time to party F/N!" Becca said cheerfully as she practically dragged you by your hand and down the stairs.

Lux contained things that most upscale nightclubs did.Strobe lights, expensive alcoho,l dancers wearing hardly anything at all, woman in dresses that barley covered their legs and men getting too close for comfort ,but it did have something different about it you just couldn't put your finger on.

You had unsuccessfully lost Becca in the sea of people ,it seemed pointless to go look for her at the moment so you slowly Made your way over to the bar.

After ordering a drink from the beautiful dark skinned bartender who was definitely "dressed to kill" it wasn't long before you were hit on by many guys,you just wanted to try to have fun not fool around;so you turned them down.

But there's always that  One guy that gets a bit too friendly thinking he'll get lucky and bring a girl home with him, that particular guy tonight was around 5,4 he had blond hair and hazel eyes a tight shirt clung to his muscled body he sat down on a barstool and leaned next to you.

"If your trying to hook up with me you can just forget it." You said trying to be calm.

A smirk appeared on the man's face "Aww don't be that way Honey I just wanna show you a good time.. My name's klye" He said, his voice laced with lust

"I've said it once and I'll say it again I'm not looking to hook up with anybody tonight!" You got a bit loud this time hoping he would get the picture.

Unfortunately he didn't, he proceeded to grab you but just before he did a tall man held his wrist tightly.

"I believe the lady said she doesn't want to hook up with someone as rude and brutish as yourself do us all a favor and leave." He said smoothly

Kyle gave him a scowl
"What gives you the right to tell me what to do?" he asked

"Because this is my club,now leave,I never want to see filth like you again." He said loudly

You couldn't see the face of the man who helped you but kyle looked traumatized.

"Y..yes sir." He stuttered before slowly making his way through the crowd and up the stairs.

You turned and looked at the mysterious owner of "Lux" and were greeted by a man who happened to be about 6'4,he had dark hair wore a suit and tie and even though you said you weren't here to hook up you had to admit he was very handsome.

"T..thanks for helping me with that creep." You said tucking a stray strand of hair behind your ear.

The man smiled showing a set of pearly white teeth.
"The pleasure is all mine I don't believe I've introduced myself I'm Lucifer... Lucifer Morningstar."
My first time writing a fanfic for Fox's TV show Lucifer
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TheCaptainsGirl Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Love it all ready, Can;t wait for more =D <3 

Lucifer one of the best show to come to TV in Years, I Love it so much that I think I am going to hell but hay if he is the Devil than am taking first class there on a one way trip ;) 
TheFandomGirl121 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016  Student General Artist
So happy I found this :D
I love Lucifer and can't wait for more :)
Mickxbeth2012 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'm working on chapter 2 right now
doctorwhofangirl10 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Omg yuuuuss ....2 more episodes left ....Agggghhhhhh!!!!! XD
Negisa Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016
looking forward to whats next
Mickxbeth2012 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you,I recently put up more
soulsociety96 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Btw love this
Mickxbeth2012 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, there's a few on archive of our own under Lucifer(TV)
soulsociety96 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
This is lovely news! Thank you for sharing this information
Mickxbeth2012 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I put a bit more to this story if you'd like to read it 
soulsociety96 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I would love too, sorry I vanished things happened
Mickxbeth2012 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :)
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